Great work! Needs polish

I think your style of art is great, and very well suited for Flash, and while you generally seem to have a good eye for cinematic punch there were a few things that killed it for me. The biggest thing throughout was the slow-motion; it was too slow, and lasted too long during the action sequences, which made it look sort of choppy. The rock music didn't fit, and was a real mood-killer. The fade out at the end was also a little choppy. Spidey and TMNT made me chuckle a little, but again, didn't really fit the mood, or anything to the plot.

Hope this helps!

Still needs work but not bad!

I'd say your worst problem was the voice acting. Let's just say that voice acting isn't meant to be your talent in this life, so get someone else to do it even let your PC narrate it.

Excellent!

You have an excellent sense for great cinematography, your cuts were smooth, shots were erfect in establishing the mood. You did so much with such subtle techniques. Awesome work!

Good idea, needs better execution

Cool game, cool concept. As others have said, its a bit repeptitive. One simple addition that could help this game out ALOT would be the addition of scenery in the landscape. When you have no enemies on the screen, you can't tell that you're moving because the landscape is just a plain gradient background. Add in some rocks or trees, and making it scroll just a little faster wouldnt hurt either.